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IELTS OG - Test 2 - Writing task 1


针对循环类型的线状图,如果依然按照起始点和终点的描述方法那么就必然无法避免数据(纵坐标和横坐标)的重复描述。

接下来是针对句子写作实际面临的问题,例如:

The highest temperature in New York and London occurs in the middle of July, hovering around 30 and 25 degrees Celsius respectively.

The hottest weather in New York and London occurs in the middle of July, when it hovers around 30 and 25 degrees Celsius respectively.

而第二个表格数据是极为简单的,但它的描述会跟题目给出的词汇高度重复。例如:

Of the three cities, New York has the longest total annual hours of sunshine, with more than 2500 hours.

The sunniest city of the three metropolises throughout a year is New York, whose duration of sunshine reaches more than 2500 hours.

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